Fahenstock and Secor suggest that "all arguments begins in agreement, in shared assumption of value, the literary canon offers such a value and even a general exigence for continuing argument." (Fahenstock, Sector 435) Using this method, Lehrer first states the pre-existing argument in order to bring the audience into the topic on which he is going to talk about. In the first four paragraphs, he shares his passion for books with the audience while defending the technological advancement which has been shifting the culture of books to digital. In other words, he has unconditional love for books but cannot deny the rapidly increasing convenience being created by moving the act of reading into to digital medium. Technological advancement has been the most significant achievement of mankind in our recent history, therefore it would sound rather foolish to completely deny its progress. However there are things that people worry and criticize about our progress in technology as well.
Lehrer really states his position in the fifth paragraph for the first time. He does "have a nagging problem" with reading sentences on a screen (Lehrer). It worries him that everything in reading becoming easier will eventually diminish people's understanding for perception. This is his value, and the message in this argument. He then defines the concept of reading from a neurological perspective to defend his point.
The general questions that constitute the concept of stases are facts, definitions, causes, values, and proposals. The arrangement of these components is important. Lehrer shuffles the order of these questions in an interesting way. His order goes from value, definition, value, then to proposal. He defines the act of reading by saying that ventral route and dorsal stream in brain are the two pathways for making sense of words. Ventral route is used to grasp readings semantically described as simple digital readings, while dorsal stream is used to pay conscious attention to a sentence, for more complex and difficult readings that shapes perception and intelligence. He could have engaged the audience into creating value that digitization of books is not such a good idea just by this brain anatomical definition of reading. The audience also could have made assumptions that Lehrer is opposed to digital books, since "we often read arguments in the lower stases by pushing at their implications for action." (Fahnestock, Sector 431) However, he puts the definition in between the two paragraphs stating his value.
There is certainly a reason for his decision to have done so. It is simply because Wired.com has a huge variety of audience. He wanted to make clear points to guide the audience to their assumptions as close as possible to what he really wants to address. Some people could have had different assumptions than what he has originally intended. It is impossible to entirely control and expect the outcome of a text, but he wanted to have as much control as possible. He allows his audience to progressively shape their values as they read. The audience can have opinions about the topic after he mentions his value initially. Then after the anatomical definition of reading, the audience is opened up with another choice to form their opinion, and the same for the next paragraph. Therefore, the audience goes through stages on which they are more and more engaging into the argument. As Fahnestock and Sector says, "what we are really after is what it takes to convince an audience to endow the stasis and hence the topic of an argument with significance." (Fahenstock and Sector 433)
He then politely proposes his idea to "include a feature that allows us to undo their ease, to make the act of reading just a little bit more difficult." (Lehrer) This proposal is within his stases of value. The potential downgrading of minds and intelligence that digital books pose is mentioned as he finishes up the blog.
The bonus point and the bonus bonus point stood out regardless of their names. The implication almost seemed as they were not some extra thoughts at the end of a blog. Both paragraphs are his personal experience that backs up his point that digital books pose danger in lowering intelligence. Intriguingly, he makes his claims in a very open, friendly manner. He defends digital books as he cannot refuse to acknowledge their convenience. The reason for this is to make not only his value, but the argument itself significant, and also appreciate the forward steps in technology that mankind has been taking. He reminds his audience of the importance of reading as well as technological advancements, as Fahnestock and Sector suggests that "there is value in reminding an audience of its values." (Fahnestock and Sector 441)
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